World of Chaos
written on 01.02.2010 at 23:15 hours
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The world is corrupted
corrupted by jealousy and hate
it will come the date
the date of punishment
we should educate
the love, which purified
de_Kev
mondgeist
written on 01.02.2010 at 23:17 hours
Hey I'm Kevin
Just sorry, if it's bad. It's my first try to write in english ;)
I'm just german, but you should cherish your life and use this very moment
yours sincerly de_Kev
I'm open for every kind of critic
written on 01.02.2010 at 23:43 hours
Hi Kevin
My english is not very well, but I think your poem is good. The Message is great and I like your style.
I hope you know what I want to say ;)
I wish you a good night
Jenny